Chapter 1 - First part

So...here is the first chaptre. I hope you like it. Guys *-* Maybe I'll post the story in the youtube. I don't know :s Tell me what you think and please tell if exists mistakes too.. ^^


“ I got a felling, but tonight is gonna e a good night...”
I woke up with my mobile phone.
Like as usually, I streched my arm to turn off my mobile phone, but this time I didn’t closed my eyes again like I usually do every day. That day was different, was my birthday. I jumped out of bed and then I was in direction to the kitchen for have a big breakfast.
I went downstairs singing “ I got a felling “, while I was thinking in the next dance that I would invent for the Cheer.
Finally I would do 16 years old. Finally!!!!!!! Finally, I could go out at night without the advises of my father like “ Effie you’re a kid. You can’t hang out at night..and bla bla bla”. I know that my father only cares with me but sometimes it’s very annoying. He has never been very protector , but since my mother died I began to be the only thing that was left to him.
After taking the breakfast, I went upstairs and I went for my bedroom, planing the things better. I wanted everything perfect, like the “ My sweet sixteen”.
Suddenly my father knocked to the door. I sat in my bed and I said to come in.
-Happy Birthday, Effy!!! 16 years old.....You’re growing so fast. Even yesterday you had 6 years old...- she said with some tears sliding in his face
-Dad... I’m only going to do 16 years old. I’m not so old. - I smiled
-I know...but...in some time you’ll not talk with your old father.
-Ohhh! I’ll never do it, dad. I love you! - I smiled and without counting, I started to cry.
-I love you too, my little daughter. - he smiled
-Now.. I have to prepare my party. And I think that crying won’t help me to get better in the pictures. - I smiled while I was cleaning my tears.
-I was thinking that you’ll not saying something about this like “ Dad, be careful, look my hair”, “ Dad be careful with my dress”.. Ok.. I’ll leave you with your ritual of beauty.
When my father left, I continued with the preparatives for my party. I has already had my dress. It was yellow and made with silk. I loved that dress. I caught my mobile phone, and I saw that I had 20 mensages. All of them was saying “ Happy Birthday”, what put me very happy because I have ever liked that the people remember me, specially in my birthday. Quickly I thanked the mensages at all my friends and in specially my boyfriend, Damen and my best friends Mary and Bella. After this I taked a shower for relax a little before my party. When I was leaving the bathroom I heard my father talk with someone. I left my bedroom wearing my colorfoul robe and I saw Mary and Bella in the hall. I made signs for they went upstairs and then they did it.
-So...are you ready ? - Mary asked while Bella was moving my hair seeing the best hairstyle.
-Yes...I think...- I stuttered to pretend that I was scared
-Don’t worry, we won’t put your face red, or put your face palid like a vampire.- Bella said
-So, let’s go!! - I said
We laughed at the same time. And they started to prepare myself to the party. I know that I could do it alone, but with Mary and Bella everything is funnier. I spent almost an hour with make up tests, hairstyles, etc.
I only saw creams, make up, curlingtongs, etc in front of me. Everything for put me perfect for that day.
Finally, after 2 hours, I was ready. I watch me in mirrow and I was amazed. Mary and Bella could open a hairdresser. They put me fabulous. I thanked and then I left my bedroom.
When I was going downstairs and I was amazed with the decoration. Everything was with beautiful decoration, and with my favourite colours yellow and orange. And in the middle of the living room I could read a big poster made by my friends, saying “ Happy Birthday, Effie”. I was so happy that I went downstairs quicly and I started to thanks everyone for it. After talking with about 60 persons I started to feel tired so I went in the direction of the couch
I sat, and I rest my head because I was very confused with so many people walking around and around in the living room. Suddenly I started to feel me stranged, if like, something was missing. I decided to go to garden with my friends for get some fresh air.
I looked for Bella and Mary and they decided go with me to garden.
-What’s wrong? - Bella asked
I don’t what I should answer. What the hell was going? I always was the most popular girl and I’ve ever been with lot of people around me, even when I didn’t want. Why? Why I was feeling so strange?
-What’s wrong, Effie? - she asked again
-Nothing.... Let’s back for the living room. I’m not going to do 16 years old every day. So...- I tried to put my friends happier with a fake smile
-And....What you think of going to open the presents? After seeing what I bought for you, you will get very happy!! - Mary said
-No...no...she is going to like more what I’m going to give her!- Bella said, trying to challenge Mary
Of course that I knew that they were trying put me happier. Sincerely, I dind’t know I was feeling like that. Maybe was beacause the hours that I was sat with so many creams and hairstyles.
We backed for the living room and I get happier when I saw my boyfriend, Damen White. But....but he wasn’t alone. He...He...was kissing a girl. I started felling tears in my eyes. And sudenly I started to cry. I didn’t care with the crowd that was there. I started runig and suddenly a strong arm snapped my wrist. I looked to him and in that moment I stopped runing. I was paralyzed. I didn’t know what to say. "

Imortal Kiss

Hi guys.. I'm Effy Edwards. So this is my first post and here I'm going to post my story. Imortal Kiss ^.^

Summary:

"Effy Roberts has ever had everything. Friends, boyfriends, popularity….She always lived the life of any teenager’s dream. But in her 16th birthday everything changes when she sees her world going down when her boyfriend betrays her. Behind that ,she meets Vincent, a boy unlike any. She soon falls in love with that beautiful boy, sapphire eyes and hair black as night ….

What Effie does not know is that many secrets are to be discovered , and sometimes she can not trust in the people she loves most. Because everything is not always what it seems….. "

I'll post the first the chaptre in the nest Friday ^^

Kisses, Effy ^^

Here is the trailer :